I don't know why I have decided to write this story, since the only one who posted from the named 'writers guild' in a way that I could always see had been banned from it!
Please, post not in the forum, but on my profile.
Thanks, MonkeyV.
Here it goes!!:
Chapter 1
Vannaka quickly went for the stairs and climbed up the stairs five by five. In less than 10 seconds he was near Dezzick, looking at the... lets call it 'thing' trying to enter.
-What is it?- Vannaka was stunned, and thought the thing he was seeing was a dream.
-Before it had been a man, well, and a horse, but not stuck together, now they are 'cos the Black Knigh, with his dark magic had joint they bodies... And organs too. - Dezzick whispered
Vannaka thought of a man, and a horse... It was impossible for him to thinks that could exist.
-It is like a centaur, but an artificial centaur. - Dezzick said-
-Are you going to let it enter?
-Of course not... we have to kill him.
Vannaka's face turned as cold as hatred as he said they should.
They went down the stairs and opened the door.
Dezzick was thinking about a surprise attack after letting him enter, but just when opening the door, Vannaka roared and charged